Brooklynn's NY Briana's AZ
Alayna's HI
Lindsay's Exhibition Louisiana David's Washington
Tia's Alaska
Nevaeh North Carolina
Jeremiah Nevada
Here are the published copies of the feature articles that some people did for extra credit.
Brooklynn's Got to Go to College Johanna's What Are You Doing in Your Life Adia's Facts About Two Different Colleges Tia's Feature Article Final Draft Lindsays Feature Articlehe Road to College Dylan Hughley College Project Nevaeh's Bears vs Savage Storm We spent a long time working on these feature articles comparing two colleges. These are the final drafts of the feature articles before I corrected and graded them. I can't wait to see the typed copies! Brooklynn's College Comparison Feature Article Feature Articles-Adia, Alayna, Satchel, Tiyonna, Lindsay & Tia Jayden's Feature Article Dylan's College feature articl Jeremiah's college feature article Briana's College Feature Article Calvin's feature article
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Students wrote sample leads to go with this picture from the Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Chris Van Allsburg. Please read these mysterious leads.
Will their fate
continue? Will they survive? A deep voice “ I told them what would happen “ now
they’ll pay.”
-Dylan Hughley
Is the house a
spaceship? Do anyone know? Is someone in the house? -Kierra Crain
The house is going
up. It’s dark and scary. The smoke is coming under the house. –Calvin Young
They never thought
it would happen. It was a real shock. –Alayna Johnson
The time has come.
It’s too late to go back.
–Toni- Lindsay Johnson
How did the house lift? Are there ghosts or aliens? -Tiyonna Lee
They say they were
aliens who were sent to get humans to come to their home for dinner and took
their home planet. –David
Cummings
The house floating
up. There is a lot of smoke coming from the house. –Adia Beatty
If I could pick a lead it would be called
the darkness has arrived. Another name would be called aliens invaded. That’s
because the smoke you comes when aliens come to earth. Also the other is
because it’s dark outside.
–Brooklynn Jackson
He forgot to
unplug the rockets. And now it’s too late. –Damarco Hutson
I told them not to
move into the house, lift off.
–Tia Allen
It’s a snow storm.
But now it is up. So it’s bad now.
–Johanna Deason
What’s happening
to the house? Is it hunted hmm…………
-Briana Thompson
I warned them. Now
it’s starting. – Jayden
Miller
I warned the
family again. There the trees was moving very fragile and the house started to
rise after I tried to warn them over and over. –Nevaeh Chrsitian
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They also wrote alternative and better leads for, "It was a dark and stormy night..." Here's what they came up with.
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They also wrote alternative and better leads for, "It was a dark and stormy night..." Here's what they came up with.
It was, dark the weather was terrible. When ever you walk in the neighborhood the darkness swallows you up.
Tia Allen
It was dark and people came out and I said not to but they did storm came out people start crying.
Johanna Deason
I was walk down the street and I heard a sound. Boom! I couldn’t believe my eyes Terrifying and scary
Tiyonna Lee
The dark and stormy night was terrible. It was the worst thing that ever happened on earth!
Alayna Johnson
It was a creepy dark and scary stormy night. A night so dark it makes me scream ah !!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Briana Thompson
The day before yesterday was
dark and stormy , yesterday was dark and stormy ,tonight is dark and
stormy ! I hear a scary voice , I think there's a ghost!
Lindsay Johnson
I think I would name it was Halloween! the kids started to scream. rain started pouring down all of it was over.
Brooklyn Jackson
It was a horror and dark
rainy thundery night. But there was no wind and no light. I was looking
out the window there stands on the sidewalk in the rain staring at me
no umbrella, he started walking on to my porch
I got scared. Then the handles started to shake, the lights went out.
B-O-O-M. I was gone.
Adia Beaty
The night started to come. The
storm got worse. But people don’t listen. The children started to get
fritened when a voice said “ Stay inside don’t go.” One child screamed
“boo”.
Nevaeh Christian
It was dark night and the earth stood still.
Jeremiah Jewell
It was time for the end.
Damarco Hutson
It all started when we walk from school. The walk was 2
miles and it became dark fast and it started raining. The rain felt
like rain hitting your face. Then it happened.
Dylan Hughley
It was night stormy and scary night. My family said the wold was ending wats going on?
David C.
